英語(yǔ)課上老師教給同學(xué)們一句英語(yǔ)格言"No Pains， No Gains" （不勞則不獲），并讓大家圍繞如下三方面以這句格言為題寫一篇短文。

　　人們?cè)诶щy面前容易氣餒，并產(chǎn)生不勞而獲的想法。

　　"不勞則不獲"這一格言能給予人鼓勵(lì)。

　　學(xué)生要取得優(yōu)異成績(jī)離不開苦功夫，所謂成功的秘訣即是辛勤的勞動(dòng)。

　　「范文」

　　No Pains， No Gains

　　People attempting a task may be discouraged in front of difficulties. They start with a great interest and passion. When they find that the task will take much more effort than they thought， their interest diminishes and their passion wanes. At that time， they are likely to have the idea of reaping a good harvest without much labor.

　　The old saying "No pains， no gains" comes as a word of cheer to these discouraged persons. No task that is really worth doing can be done either easily or quickly. No mastery of any knowledge or skill can be gained without painstaking efforts.

　　We students shoulder the task of learning knowledge that calls for exertion. To improve our grades is what every student wants. We may envy those who have achieved excellence， and wonder what makes them succeed.In fact， their secret of success is no secret. It depends largely on their efforts. Good grades only belong to hardworking students.

　　Many thanks for the favor you did for me！

　　「評(píng)語(yǔ)」

　　該文緊緊圍繞題目給出的三方面加以論述，層次清楚，語(yǔ)言流暢易懂。"interest diminishes and their passion wanes" 中詞語(yǔ)搭配講究，"reaping a good harvest without much labor" 用另一個(gè)習(xí)慣表達(dá)法點(diǎn)出了"No Pains， No Gains"的含義，同時(shí)又避免了重復(fù)。文章句式靈活，長(zhǎng)短搭配得當(dāng)，使文章朗朗上口，雖然是議論文，但卻沒有枯燥之感。